I like the 1st, 4th, and 5th panels. They get me in my heart places. You have done well, Ms. Shepard!
On the incentive – I was sort of expecting a twist, with that description; like that she was hidden behind a column, or mostly draped in Hero…While I am disappointed that you didn’t play any head games, I can be nothing less than thrilled by the quality and image itself…so very tasty 😉
I was going to make a comment about “dangling bait” and “obvious fanservice”, but then I was already looking at it, so it seemed a bit moot. X)
And hot DAMN. 8P That’s . . . that’s some fine, pouty, bare bear, right there. And her derriere.
Now, just to try to regain cred as a fan of gender equality, I suggest you should do one of Hero, just for those who would enjoy it.
Actual comments about the comic:
So this is still meant to be before Serris met Evon’s mother. If he cared so much for Ammelia, I wonder why he didn’t come back.
One agrees with your assessment on the incentive. Ah…teddy bears….
Generally, anything involved with a character from this comic and the phrase “butt dimples” tends to be on the good side of things.
I like the 1st, 4th, and 5th panels. They get me in my heart places. You have done well, Ms. Shepard!
On the incentive – I was sort of expecting a twist, with that description; like that she was hidden behind a column, or mostly draped in Hero…While I am disappointed that you didn’t play any head games, I can be nothing less than thrilled by the quality and image itself…so very tasty 😉
Boy, if this part of the story isn’t all sorts of emotional. Well done. Well done, indeed.
Why do I have the sneaky suspicion that Corrin (the guy she slept with) will turn out to be her half brother? Can anyone say, “awkward?”
PS sorry if that is a spoiler.
And so starts a quest to find her father.
Evon looking rather sexy in that incentive there aswell 😀
Now we know why Venir thought she’d been able to tempt Hero.
She’s also quite delightful, a fine way to start February off.
The continuing story is also nice (albeit bittersweet), and such a lovely and sweet depiction of pregnancy.
In a world without pregnancy tests,
You “discover” things about yourself