I like the 1st, 4th, and 5th panels. They get me in my heart places. You have done well, Ms. Shepard!
On the incentive – I was sort of expecting a twist, with that description; like that she was hidden behind a column, or mostly draped in Hero…While I am disappointed that you didn’t play any head games, I can be nothing less than thrilled by the quality and image itself…so very tasty
I was going to make a comment about “dangling bait” and “obvious fanservice”, but then I was already looking at it, so it seemed a bit moot. X)
And hot DAMN. 8P That’s . . . that’s some fine, pouty, bare bear, right there. And her derriere.
Now, just to try to regain cred as a fan of gender equality, I suggest you should do one of Hero, just for those who would enjoy it.
Actual comments about the comic:
So this is still meant to be before Serris met Evon’s mother. If he cared so much for Ammelia, I wonder why he didn’t come back.
One agrees with your assessment on the incentive. Ah…teddy bears….
Generally, anything involved with a character from this comic and the phrase “butt dimples” tends to be on the good side of things.
I like the 1st, 4th, and 5th panels. They get me in my heart places. You have done well, Ms. Shepard!
On the incentive – I was sort of expecting a twist, with that description; like that she was hidden behind a column, or mostly draped in Hero…While I am disappointed that you didn’t play any head games, I can be nothing less than thrilled by the quality and image itself…so very tasty
Boy, if this part of the story isn’t all sorts of emotional. Well done. Well done, indeed.
Why do I have the sneaky suspicion that Corrin (the guy she slept with) will turn out to be her half brother? Can anyone say, “awkward?”
PS sorry if that is a spoiler.
And so starts a quest to find her father.
Evon looking rather sexy in that incentive there aswell
Now we know why Venir thought she’d been able to tempt Hero.
She’s also quite delightful, a fine way to start February off.
The continuing story is also nice (albeit bittersweet), and such a lovely and sweet depiction of pregnancy.