Since I allowed a skin doctor to investigate my private area and she took out the magnifying glass, I feel nothing anymore. Nope, nothing at all.
When I was checked for the army duty, there were two female doctors/nurses in mid to end twenties. One behind the desk ogling interested (as i imagined) and the other put on a rubber glove and investigated my balls. That was embarrassing.
Something I’ve been meaning to comment on for some time: I seem to remember that a reworked version of the first chapter exists? Is it possible to replace the original first chapter with the reworked version on this website? Assuming that the setup of the site allows such alterations?
I do think that the depiction of Venir in the old first chapter could be off-putting for some potential readers, those coming from topwebcomics.com say, where Evon is usually listed in the top 50. As a furry fan, I’d normally hope for more of the same, but since that depiction is not representative of anything to follow, it would be a pity if it resulted in the loss of potential supporters.
I think that the reworked chapter would give new readers a better first impression — and a note could be placed at the end of chapter 1 explaining that chapter 2 was older artwork. I think people would understand that and hopefully be hooked in by then. The artwork of chapter 2 onwards is fine in my opinion.
Yeah, this couldn’t possibly be embarrassing. Noooo not at all.
What till Evon finds out that up until now it’s been Hero that’s been changing her bandages. 🙂
What? There were no other ladies skilled in bandaging that could’ve attended Evon?
Not in that castle. Heros place is very understaffed.
I don’t think I would trust anyone else besides Belvedier. Ultimate butler for the win!
Since I allowed a skin doctor to investigate my private area and she took out the magnifying glass, I feel nothing anymore. Nope, nothing at all.
When I was checked for the army duty, there were two female doctors/nurses in mid to end twenties. One behind the desk ogling interested (as i imagined) and the other put on a rubber glove and investigated my balls. That was embarrassing.
Both of it is true, i swear.
Something I’ve been meaning to comment on for some time: I seem to remember that a reworked version of the first chapter exists? Is it possible to replace the original first chapter with the reworked version on this website? Assuming that the setup of the site allows such alterations?
I do think that the depiction of Venir in the old first chapter could be off-putting for some potential readers, those coming from topwebcomics.com say, where Evon is usually listed in the top 50. As a furry fan, I’d normally hope for more of the same, but since that depiction is not representative of anything to follow, it would be a pity if it resulted in the loss of potential supporters.
I think that the reworked chapter would give new readers a better first impression — and a note could be placed at the end of chapter 1 explaining that chapter 2 was older artwork. I think people would understand that and hopefully be hooked in by then. The artwork of chapter 2 onwards is fine in my opinion.
“If you would prefer that Lord Dent do it, I’m sure I could rouse him.”
Somehow I doubt that Evon would object to that suggestion. 🙂
Please be co-operative; it will make this so much easier. Otherwise, we’ll have to do it the hard way and you won’t like the hard way.